Whoa, you've put a lot of blood, sweat, and heart, into this story you're working on. I admire that. I couldn't skim through your gallery without leaving some kind of comment. There's a lot to sift through so I can't BS a review for your story, but, it looks your grammar is on point and I think the writing style itself is engaging. Your characters seem very colorful, both literally and figuratively. When I find the time, I would like to delve a little more into "Ignition" when I have the mental fortitude.